Keith Collyer
1 min readJun 19, 2019

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I get the feeling that there is something really valuable in this article, it needs help to draw it out. Lots of jumping between points. Not great flow. Not helped by colours getting mangled in the example (orange shows yellow, red shows salmon pink), and difficult to read axes —horizontal maps onto the list of scopes? Bets come out of nowhere. What line are we drawing?

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Keith Collyer
Keith Collyer

Written by Keith Collyer

I’m a husband, father, grandfather, retired Systems Engineer, bassist, cyclist and will write on any and all of those things as the urge takes me.

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